Published On: January 19, 2009

Together, p.08

4 thoughts on “Together, p.08

  1. ha! are those pomegranates I see? also, I like the tonal shift in the flashback.

  2. Yes they are! lol You caught that quick.

  3. Pomegranates? I thought they were apples. Either way, red fruit. 🙂 Wow, that’s a big shift in a short time! If I’m reading this right, she looks pretty heavily pregnant in the flashback and that baby’s probably not more than six months old. I like the tonal shift too. It’s such a cheerier tone… and that says a lot about the events of the story right there. I wonder why those young men are frowning at her. I’m sure we’ll see soon!

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